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I was very disappointed with this book.... it should have been set in the 1800's, with a wimpering maiden. I could barely force myself through it. Just because a man looks good does not mean a succesful woman will just faint at his touch.

I am sorry, Sandra Brown needs to get a new style. Finding romance with a loser that bets he can get the main character in to bed - and wins a bottle of Wild Turkey if he does (if he loses he forfeits a fishing pole!), is just such a big turn off. Sorry, this sort of writing was fine back in the 80's when Brown started. To bad to see she has no changed in the last couple decades.

I was a bit skeptical about reading this book after seeing other reviews. Turns out i really liked it. It was a bit far-fetched at times, but overall it was a good read.

Note to reader from Kentucky......this book IS a reprint from the 80's!

I really wanted to like this one. I've been following this series from the beginning and some of the books were quite fun but this one was difficult to get through (and it's not taht long).

My first issue was that the main troupe of characters is entirely made up of fighters. A human fighter, an elf fighter, a dwarf fighter, and a dwarf fighter cleric. Having Mialee or Lidda around usually helped the books... anything for a little more variety. Joazn teh cleric makes a cameo in the beginning and returns and we know Naull will appear at some point... but when you get four fighters as the party you can be assured that there will be some hack and slash on its way.

As to the fights... Lain writes a very interesing fight with folks feinting and ducking and blades nicking or pommels hammering... but there were a few too many of these just in the first few chapters. I'm still going to read the last book as I'm hoping this one just didn't come together.

Return of the Damned is an appropriate title indeed. Reading it was like an eternity of punishment. This is a new low point for the series, which will come to an end in the next book.

Our returning line-up consists of Regdar the fighter, Naull the wizard, his long lost love, in a supporting role, Pelor the cleric and Alhandra the paladin in walk on roles. Regdar is joined by 4 fighter companions for the majority of the book that we have not seen before.

In the service of the Duke of Koratia Regdar is bent on suicide by dungeon delving. After being berated by the duke since Regdar is a captain and not to be risking himself he hears that Naull may be alive. Regdar commits treason by leaving the duke's service, and compounds it by taking the four best fighters with him under false pretenses.

They proceed to hew their way through wave after wave of cannon fodder, showing that Regdar is still as dumb as he was when fighting goblins in book one The Savage Caves. This approach of a head on attack against insurmontable odds succeeds in most improbable fashion with our heroes killing everything that moves no matter how powerful despite having no plan, no subterfuge and no skills other than hitting things really hard and fast.

There are heroes who can take on insurmountable odds and win, without making the reader roll his eyes in disbelief. This book does not do this. Regdar is so stubborn and limited in his uses I was hoping for the blackguards troops to take him out.

Despite some bright moments early on, and the redeeming Plague of Ice, this franchise of rotating authors has turned into novel after novel of slapdash plots, conflicting character portrayals and backgrounds and uninspired prose. Star Wars quotes are not funny in a dungeon crawl though apparently the authors don't understand this as they appear in more than one book. Perhaps it was a running gag that they each try to hide one Star Wars series quote in each book. It wasn't funny guys, it was stupid and it jerks the reader right out of their willing sense of disbelief.

I had quite high hopes for this, or at least, high hopes in the realm of D&D writing. See, way back in the very first book in this series, Lain introduced Regdar and Naull, the Iconic characters from the D&D re-release, as slowly developing a love. In "The City of Fire," Naull and Regdar's love is developed, and at the end, Naull chooses a terrible self-sacrifice, leaving Regdar alone, but saving the world. In this story, there's a chance - a small chance - that Naull might actually be alive!

So, of course, Regdar hooks up with those he can find to try and save her...

...and goes on a very pointless hack and slash, fight after fight plot with little to no cohesion and a senseless sort of "keep fighting, one bad thing a chapter" style that left me cold. The big climax wasn't as climactic as it needed to be, and to be honest, it was the worst in the series so far.

It's unfortunate, because this was the sub-plot I was really enjoying (well, barring my hopeful, but never gonna happen, love interest between Hennet and Kerwyn). I can only hope the next title, "The Death Ray," brings Regdar and Naull (and all the rest) back into play as a more plot-driven enjoyable story.

'Nathan

After I read the book I couldn't help but feel cheated of something. This book encapsulated none of the Bernice spirit I loved reading in the other books. I admit the book was mostly seen from another character's view and not Benny's but the point is I could not get involved with any of the characters. The writing was making it really hard. It just irritated me to no end. The sentences were so convoluted I had to read them several times just to make some sense out of it. It wasn't funny, it wasn't dramatic, it wasn't anything. I really wish I never bought or read this piece of awful disappointment.

I wish Dave Stone would get out of the Bernice Summerfield universe. All of his books (with the possible exception of Ship of Fools) are totally not funny or worthy of being read. I wish he would let some other authors keep up with Bernice, and he can go back to Judge Dredd or something else.